Wednesday, April 6, 2016

Sean camp coastering

Camp recount
“Weeeeeeee” i said as i jumped down the  dreadful muddy hill. The smell of the sea grew stronger further down i went.

Shivers went down my spine as we walked around sharp jagged rocks. My hurt sank when we got to the jumping rock. I was thinking of any excuse to get out of it. It was no use nothing worked. I almost had a heart attack when the instructor called my name.

My legs felt like jelly, my hands went numb i couldn't  feel my feet. I walked towards the edge. And jumped!

Find out what happens in part 2

2 comments:

  1. Good job Sean
    I liked how you are having a 2nd part in the story.

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  2. Good job Sean
    I liked how you are having a 2nd part in the story.

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