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Goal:To sort my writing into paragraphs.

The Blacksmith

My arm collapsed as I lifted the heavy hammer.

P1: I made a screech as a shot of pain ran up my back.

I had given up I was to old for working now.

P2: I let out a big gasp of breath as I held my heart, I heard a bang I walked over to the corner of the room and a knights armour fell over,I opened the helmet and a little rat jumped right out at my face I yelled!He pounced off my face and ran off.

P3: The rat had came back I lifted up my shoulders and frowned to the rat.A horn went off as I rolled my eyes up to see what was going on.

P4: A tiny crusader jumped right in front of my eyes I couldn't believe it,I mumbled sadly”great first I've lost my strength now I've gone mad”.The tiny crusader echoed back to me,I looked at the saddle on the rat's back.

P5: I found out that this was no rat Gallahan is the most finest Stable mouse in the land,He asked me for some help,I can't help you.The tiny crusader pulled out his miniature sword.I can fix that I said in a deep voice.

P6: I let the little mouse and crusader crawl up on my hand,I took them to my desk and opened the window,I fixed the sword and handed it back to the crusader.He thanked me then he said my task is not over yet,I gave him a confused face.

P7: Another horn went off I was blown away as I looked around me,Tiny crusaders gathered around I was shocked,Right who's next I said as I felt proud.

By Lily.B